Hi! This is really, really good. . . I wish I could write poetry like this. I cannot write poetry AT ALL. It is quite pathetic really. . .no offence to anyone else.

Nice you have a talent I lack you can rhyme a bit and I can never do that I like it such a sad story but it still makes sense you know it is sad but true I suppose that is my perspective on it I like it your my favorite now

Nice poems! Like my other review, some of the rhythm was bumpy, but I like the imagery that comes to mind with these. Very nice, very cool.

kool poem... i like.. thanks for reviewing my poem. i like your too...i like the part about the oaths... really powerful.

Yay! sequel!
I'll look out for that short story of yours.
*Walks away smiling*

Is their going to be a sequel... I can't wait. Iwonder what will happen to the amazons...
Sorry I got sidetracked. Anyway. Interesting poem. The ideas were really brief. Lets you fill in the blanks...