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| Adame Greyheart 2006-11-28 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this is really great. Keep up originality, it's a rare thing here at fictionpress. I find the story an interessting point of view on fox hunting. Nice piece of work. |
| Pheobe Meryll 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseAgain, this was beautiful. Everything was so intense and vivid, and I could really feel what the animal was going through. "because it was still young, at not fast yet" at should be "and" I think the ending was so bittersweet too. lovely peices, keep writing! |
| Don't Wake Up 2005-02-14 ch 1, | abuseso discriptive, so true...yet so unexpected...im trying to find the right words here...it was...magical? great? i dunno, but it was...perfect. luna |
| HaithinMaethor 2004-02-20 ch 1, | abuseAs an animal rights activist, I think everyone could get something from this piece. Make sure to double check your usage of commas. Even though I noticed alot of grammatical errors, the story fit together well. I think that as you move up the 'food chain' you won't have that problem. By 'food chain,' I mean the knowledge you are yet to obtain form writing classes. Good job and maybe post more like this. Peace and Love -Dana |
| Mir-Firiel 2004-02-18 ch 1, | abuseWow. I *love* this. Such an interesting idea for a piece of writing, I always felt sorry for the the foxes that would get torn apart by dogs and the like... |
| Toondra 2004-02-17 ch 1, | abuseI like it! It's really descriptive. Descriptive things are good. |