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Reviews For: The Fox

Adame Greyheart
2006-11-28
ch 1,
abuseWow, this is really great. Keep up originality, it's a rare thing here at fictionpress. I find the story an interessting point of view on fox hunting. Nice piece of work.
Pheobe Meryll
2006-05-14
ch 1,
abuseAgain, this was beautiful. Everything was so intense and vivid, and I could really feel what the animal was going through.

"because it was still young, at not fast yet" at should be "and" I think

the ending was so bittersweet too. lovely peices, keep writing!
Don't Wake Up
2005-02-14
ch 1,
abuseso discriptive, so true...yet so unexpected...im trying to find the right words here...it was...magical? great? i dunno, but it was...perfect.

luna
HaithinMaethor
2004-02-20
ch 1,
abuseAs an animal rights activist, I think everyone could get something from this piece. Make sure to double check your usage of commas. Even though I noticed alot of grammatical errors, the story fit together well. I think that as you move up the 'food chain' you won't have that problem. By 'food chain,' I mean the knowledge you are yet to obtain form writing classes.
Good job and maybe post more like this.
Peace and Love
-Dana
Mir-Firiel
2004-02-18
ch 1,
abuseWow. I *love* this. Such an interesting idea for a piece of writing, I always felt sorry for the the foxes that would get torn apart by dogs and the like...
Toondra
2004-02-17
ch 1,
abuseI like it! It's really descriptive. Descriptive things are good.
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