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| thornexofxroses 2008-03-19 ch 1,  | have you noticed that teen poetry is really creepy? |
| Poisoned-musician 2005-05-21 ch 1,  | deep and passionate... a little to deep, but that doesn't mean i like it. i do it is great and the way you write is amazing and you emotion must be very deep and passioante, you are a great writer.thanks for the review Laura |
| that girl over there 2004-02-28 ch 1, | Wow! i love the set up! great description! Gotta love revenge...heh heh heh. The ending is good too. I like the way every now and then the lines rhyme, but not every single line. Good job! |
| q2_222 2004-01-06 ch 1, | WOW! That was good. It sounds like something Kelly would write. |
| Fabian Cortez 2003-12-06 ch 1, | Engrossing & Intriguing take on the theme with some wonderful descriptions. I wrote a poem on a similar theme but with a diffirent take. Check it out if you like "Covet". Well Done Keep Writing!! F.C |
| Makaveli 413 2003-12-04 ch 1, | magnificent, i love it, you should check out my poem i have posted, its entered into a contest, and i wanna know what people think of it, depending on the reviews i have a few more to put up also |