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Reviews For: As Long As Your Dead

Burnt Bread
2006-08-30
ch 1,
abuseA little vengeful, arn't you...

The opening lines made be laugh out loud

"Everyone thinks you're heavenly; that you fell from the skyBut I, personally, wish that you'd die"

Not sure if they were suppose to be funny, but i like the blunt simpleness. there's no pun, no catch, no clever inuendo. You just go right out and spell it for them. I like it.

Bread
tina bena
2003-12-04
ch 1,
abuseoh..psychotic...i like it! thats intense...ive never hated anyone THAT much!
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