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| Burnt Bread 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseA little vengeful, arn't you... The opening lines made be laugh out loud "Everyone thinks you're heavenly; that you fell from the skyBut I, personally, wish that you'd die" Not sure if they were suppose to be funny, but i like the blunt simpleness. there's no pun, no catch, no clever inuendo. You just go right out and spell it for them. I like it. Bread |
| tina bena 2003-12-04 ch 1, | abuseoh..psychotic...i like it! thats intense...ive never hated anyone THAT much! |