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Au Printemps 2006-07-15 . chapter 1
My favorite by a landslide is A Spider Web of Dreams. I can't quite explain why, but it caught me more than all the others ...

web/thread make a good and more unusual rhyme. Also the line breaks work very well, and the last line is ... I'm not sure how to describe it.
Hershey249 2004-07-02 . chapter 4
Wow...and all on the same subject, too. That could get old with the wrong person, but thankfully you're not the wrong person. ^_^()
I really loved the last one, the...parallel-thingymadoo that I'm too lazy to look up the spelling for. That was really, really cool. "I am fear's perfection, riddled with scars." That is an awesome line. You certainly succeeded with that one, now matter how long it took you. ^_^
I also liked the haiku, I thought that was well written. It's hard to get long words into haikus, but you managed anyway.
That snake poem is nifty also, I like how the second part continues the timeline. Oh, and "his venom spreads the more you fight" is a neat comparison to a real snake.
catseyeview 2004-05-23 . chapter 1
I really like your work. You are beyond your years...
godawful teen-angst poetry 2004-04-15 . chapter 2
I forget, have I yet mentioned that this is one of my poems ever? You nailed it.
~lyv
not sure yet 2004-04-12 . chapter 4
o, i LOVE that last line, muchly excellent, good perspective, its interesting and well written, excellent job
not sure yet 2004-04-12 . chapter 3
o, its very good, love these ones the best so far, dunno why, bit more familar with them too, esp love the first one, even if its the shortest it seemed to have the strongest mood of the three in my mind, awesome job
not sure yet 2004-04-12 . chapter 2
ah, I LOVE SNAKES! very good poem, ehehehe, made me want a pet snake all over again, *sigh* i hate nightmares and i have the worse ones...and night terrors too and hag attacks, gah, i suck, but anywayz, fairly good flow, muchly enjoyed this, nicely done
not sure yet 2004-04-12 . chapter 1
interesting, not at all familar with these forms of poetry, but muchly like them though from what i know, nicely done
glitterjewele 2004-02-24 . chapter 4
*sneaks into back door of the review button*

BOO!

hehe, sorry, couldn't help it. but guess what? i'm back! in all my guilty procrastinating glory, no less. i should have reviewed this series AGES ago . . . sorry! *grovels for forgiveness* it's a really fantastic little collection, i must say. chapters two and four were especially poignant to me for some reason . . . talk about a creepy snake! *shudders* but yes, this was extremely intriguing and *drumroll* educational! *gasp* hehe, yes, i had never heard of any of these formats before (well, except for the haiku), which made all the poems that much more interesting! excellent imagery and tone, as always. hope you keep adding to this (i promise to review it promptly next time, honest ;), it's great! much kudos, chica. :)
cosmo-queen 2004-01-27 . chapter 4
Membrorum parallelismu. That's a mouthful! Anyway, I really liked this addition, the contradicting lines are very effective and create some very interesting images. Keep it up :)
*cosmo-queen*
Siriusly Evil 2004-01-25 . chapter 1
wow this is really good
happydeadflower 2004-01-16 . chapter 1
I like all three of these, but the last one is my favorite although I'm not sure why, all of them are very well written.
Also, on your front page I saw this:
:: Location :: Quebec, Canada-- 95% French (Quebecois). Do I speak the language? Nope.
It made me laugh because I spent 4 years in Quebec and never learned the language. :)
Children of the Root 2004-01-11 . chapter 4
hm... a very interesting style of poem. I like it.
Its kinda creepy, but quite awesome.
Keep it 100 2004-01-10 . chapter 4
Awesome. Just awesome.
PainKiller 2004-01-10 . chapter 3
Kinda creepy, really, most especially the Tetractys. Sort of nonsensical, but also chilling, too. Your poetry just continues to amaze me, like 'Weaver of the parlous dreams'. That is SO cool. I'm such a fan of yours!
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