original, for sure. wonderful images, so vivid!

Oh...my...
This is a fantastic poem. It's so beautiful, with lots of images of darkness and death and pain and etc and yay, I love it so much!! Really, really good job. Congrats and keep writing...
~Tsukiyo no Yume~

wow! cool. what else? deep.
CA
shoouldn't b rated R tho, not even PG-13

Beautiful imagery. I love it. I can't yet rid myself of the pictures in my head, and that's fine by me. Beautifully done.
~ Yumeko Indou

All I can say is WOW! That is very good. I can actually relate to that. One of my close friends was a pretty demonic kid ( literally), but he managed to change himself for the good, proving that even evil demons and devils can cry and change. I'm glad he didn't take his life though.

Very creative poem! I neva thought of it that way. I mean I write a lot of evil poems, but they are all bout shitty stuff. So anyway, nice job here, keep writing!
If u can, plz r and r some of my work too, it means a lot to me!
Thanks!