k sorri bout da half review... now as i was sayin. ^_^ i still like it^_^ it's a really good story

sorri it took me so long to review the rest of the story. it's really good and i'm sad that it is finished :(

first why doesn't this have anymore reviews!? and wow... i like it, i love you're writting style, i'll usually only leave reviews on this writing stlye, it flows, and isn't boring. you also describe the characters good, i love it! i have a hard time remembering to, and you went into good detail of them. only other thing to say is maybe tell what the non-main characters look like. great story though, wish i had time to read it all right now
later

Ok, in some parts i gagged a little, but that's just me. It's good story, and i like it all the same. Well done!