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Sarpedon 2003-12-13 . chapter 1
the beginning was really brilliant it was so sad. but (I'm really not sure whether to say this next bit or not, just in case it really is a really close relative) i think it's a dog. you could never guess this other than the last verse. i seriously hope i'm right cos if it isnt a dog then...please inform me and feel free to be nasty to me.
sorry (for the death of that which was close to you and just in case i'm wrong),
Sarpedon x
Museworks 2003-12-06 . chapter 1
This poem makes me sad. :(
I'm sure you've also been feeling terrible--was it your brother or sister?
Although they're not with you anymore physically, they'll always be beside you in spirit, and always in your memory. Have faith, and take care.
--Museworks
**Live to love. Love to live**
WarriorHeart 2003-12-06 . chapter 1
Cute and sad.
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