 Siberia82 2003-12-06 . chapter 1Ah, what a sorrowful poem. Your pain seeps marvellously through each verse, though I'm a bit confused as to who the "you" is. Is it yourself, the guy who left you, or even someone else? You didn't make that clear, but besides that detail, it was really good. Keep writing!
Would you consider reading "Cruel"? I'd like to hear from you. Please? :) |