Reviews for To Become a Suitable Heroine

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techknit 2008-07-12 ch 16, anon.	abusePretty good chapter, lots of action and fighting, but i thought Ray wasn't supposed to be good at fighting? and woot? sorry, but that kinda trhew off the beat of the story.
techknit 2008-07-12 ch 11, anon.	abusePretty good chapter, but you'd think she'd be a bit more traumatised when somebody almost raped her though. I thought that was really unrealistic.
entity.unkown 2008-07-08 ch 25,	abusei really enjoyed this story ^^ the main character was hilarious i'm going to be looking at your other stories now
Mausnea 2008-06-30 ch 14,	abuse1: Can't decide between Ash and Ray. :D Ray cause she's awesome and hilarious and clumsy and is sometimes a nekomimi and isn't a typical heroine... 2: HE IS HILARIOUS! And he was nice to Ray-ray after her mum died.
Mausnea 2008-06-30 ch 10,	abuseLAWLS. Poor Larayis. :D
Mausnea 2008-06-30 ch 9,	abuseI'm sicking my friend on you if I die of laughter... But just to get him to read this. :D
Mausnea 2008-06-30 ch 8,	abusecackle GO RAY!
Mausnea 2008-06-30 ch 4,	abuseNEKOMIMI! keekeekee I'm bored. You may get fanart of neko Ray.
vanessa 2008-06-27 ch 2, anon.	abuseI'd really appreciate if you'd stop 1.) put your thank yous on every chapter 2.) apologizing 3.) putting your thoughts & THANK YOUS! I really like the story but it's agravating when I have to go through half the pages of thank yous before actually getting to the story!
Nikki 2008-06-16 ch 25, anon.	abuseYour story is awesome and I enjoyed every fleeting second of it. I loved, loved, loved it! I love Ray, Ash, Ana, everybody! I really enjoyed this and I believe that you enjoyed every review you've got and more! The one and only, Nikki
Angriegator 2008-05-26 ch 25,	abuseStories like this are the reason why I stay up all night to read. (: It was a lovely story, good job!
Aytheria 2008-05-12 ch 25,	abuseobliges begged request to review Just finished reading this. Have to say it definitely was one really good story for cliched amusement, which I'm quite sure is what you intended it to be. Thus, it was perfect. :) Funny, sweet, loveable, with a bit of good old angst. But mostly just enjoyable. The kind of thing that makes you smile after a really bad day. So just to let you know, I appreciated every last chapter, and especially the delightful character of Ray. And after two very badly taken exams, I have to say reading this has been the best part of my day and I think I'll go to bed with a smile on my face. So thanks. :] xox Ria
lovingstar 2008-05-02 ch 20,	abuseThis is an amazing story!!
Not Who I Look Like 2008-04-03 ch 25,	abuseFirst of all let me just tell you that I absolutely love this story, and that you have just totally made my spring break. The plot's good and your sense of humor is absolutely amazing. You did a wonderful job defining your characters, and I really loved Ray's little conversations with herself. My dad had to come downstairs twice to yell at me for laughing so loudly. And, when I finished chapter twenty and clicked on the little scrolly thingy that lets you select a chapter, I nearly started crying when I realized that I was at the bottom and that sob I might actually have to wait to read the next chapter. Then I noticed that you could actually scroll down and select the next chapter. And Okay I may have screamed "Yay" loud enough for my dad to come down and yell at me for the 3RD TIME! But who's keeping track honestly? Anyway, I REALLY loved your story. This is probably the longest review I have EVER written, so you better be proud. And if you aren't I'll start stalking you. Not a fun experience, believe me. You can ask my last victim... actually you can't... that poor kid... J.K. Anyway I need to get to bed It's past midnight and I being the good little girl I am -insert snort here- need to go to sleep. BYE! THANX 4 WRITING AND POSTING THIS!
gimpette 2008-04-03 ch 25,	abuseok so you are being honored with my first review EVER on here. grins you deserve it,that story made me laugh the whole way through it was so funny. although i think you should have got vex to set fire to trillys hair or something. But yep great story. its going in my favourites.

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