I really liked this story!! Ray kicks butt XD
You're an awesome writer, thanks for keeping me thoroughly entertained with this great story X)

I really loved your story the main charater acually reminds me of one of my friends, she is just like her lol... i really enjoyed it i hope you continue making more stoires, big fan now. ^.^...

What BEUTY! :D

Fictionpress isnt workign to read the other chappies? Is that for everyone?

I love this story! I've read it five times already... I wish I could mimic your style. I'm one of those uptight and serious writers. My latest work is the closest I've ever gotten to it. I think somebody spiked my drink, 'cause I sure sound drunk in that story.

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yeah i can agree that the ending went a little to fast for me...was kind of hard to follow. But the story over all was brilliant and i loved it cute and fluffy! nice use of a used plot (ya know the one where the prince disguses himself to be normal..yadda yadda yadda) keep writing

yay!! tis finished *wipes away imaginary tear* loll

lmfao. the whole random dark magician dude..sweet xD
me no like cleft chins *shudders* loll

LOL @ 'ash's' joke..the back thingo...rofl. xD i like-y

God I LoVe stories like this.!.
It was great but just be careful to make sure that you don't teenagerise your work and make it simple and sweet(to the point). Elaborating provides useful infrmtion to the reader so we can see what you see when you write.
Great work.!.

sappy is good.!.

We always said "not the sharpest tool in the shed" (not "in the tool shed") but I only point it out b/c two tools feels a little redundant.

WOW! nice story!

Loved this chapter. I was laughing at the way she says thing. Really, you are a comical writer. Must continue to read and see how this ends.

And yes, it is the sharpest tool in the tool shed.

wow that was such a good story! love ya!