|Reviews for To Become a Suitable Heroine|
| Licoricetears 1/22/13 . chapter 5
| RexDanielsLuver 1/20/13 . chapter 1
Please read this story or your life will be incomplete!
MoonGirl By MoonGirl1155 Genre: Fantasy
Also, please review it! Thank you!
| Kyritus Snow 1/8/13 . chapter 25
I loved the story, I have been reading fanfiction for years but have read very few story's on fictionpress. If all of them are as good as yours than I will definatly be reading more!
| Milana89 12/16/12 . chapter 25
Firstly I just wanted to say how much I love reading this.
I stayed up until 1:30 a.m., with a big Civics test the next day, just to finish reading this. That's how great it is.
You know, I thought Ray would be an annoying Mary-Sue girl, but she was actually so funny and wonderful and likeable.
I'll be sure to make this my first favourite, and read your other stories once I've gotten an adequate amount of sleep (and failed the test).
So thank you for writing this wonderful story, but #%$ * you for keeping me up until the wee hours of morning.
| Wendy Heo 12/13/12 . chapter 25
So...touching :) Melted me on the spot
| Cretha Loesing 12/3/12 . chapter 25
I'm sorry, I really didn't enjoy your story.
The main character is a mary-sue: for all her sarcasm, rude-ness, and really kid of pathertically put 'tragic backstory', she manages to get everybody good on her side. Then win said a-hole of a prince.
On the up-side, I enjoyed your humor. It was very well-done.
However your story needs work, I learned to expect in it (obviously) Larayira? (name problem right there, however that is subjective to the person reading it.) Ray (obvious shortening for modern-ness, dobby's from Harry Potter, and Ash has the same problem with his name, aside from the fact I cannot remember for the life of me what his full name is) Ray is bound to fail in absolutely everything, be ridiculously hyper and rude, and arrogant, and proud, and self-centered (and have sweet, docile, shy Anabelle turn into mad stepsister from hell within three seconds- which of course real people do that) yet STILL manage to win the hearts of key people and pass this 'contest'.
| kahu 11/30/12 . chapter 25
I really enjoyed your story and hope you keep writing in future.
| x-rayLady 11/29/12 . chapter 25
Hilarious story! Stobborn un-heroine heroines are the best!
| Iceleaf 11/28/12 . chapter 14
Noooo! She lost her ears and tail. Thats dreadful!
Though if she does not want them, I do. I would happily have them.
| Iceleaf 11/28/12 . chapter 10
I did not think it was terrible.
The 'bloody hell' bit was well timed.
| Iceleaf 11/28/12 . chapter 9
I liked the chapter where she was hyper. My sides hurt from laughing so much.
| Iceleaf 11/28/12 . chapter 4
Neither do I. I would LIKE to have them.
| x3sYellowie 11/24/12 . chapter 25
Oh my, such a nice ending to this story :) I really loved the way you wrote at the start, but then in the middle it all got funnily unserious. Not that I disliked it, in fact, I actually like how you wrote Ray as such an idiotic and mental girl that wins the Prince's heart.
I love the ending; no cliche "happily-ever-after"s but just a simple "Hello" to start a new story. Really wonderful :)
| Jaguisher 11/17/12 . chapter 25
Amazing. Typical princess, prince, happily ever after story. But well written. Loved it. :)
| mk 11/4/12 . chapter 25
awwww this was so sweet! I absolutely loved this fanfic! Kyaaa the descriptions were so realistic and the couple kyaaa