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Please read this story or your life will be incomplete!
MoonGirl By MoonGirl1155 Genre: Fantasy
Also, please review it! Thank you!

I loved the story, I have been reading fanfiction for years but have read very few story's on fictionpress. If all of them are as good as yours than I will definatly be reading more!

Firstly I just wanted to say how much I love reading this.
I stayed up until 1:30 a.m., with a big Civics test the next day, just to finish reading this. That's how great it is.
You know, I thought Ray would be an annoying Mary-Sue girl, but she was actually so funny and wonderful and likeable.
I'll be sure to make this my first favourite, and read your other stories once I've gotten an adequate amount of sleep (and failed the test).
So thank you for writing this wonderful story, but #%$ * you for keeping me up until the wee hours of morning.

So...touching :) Melted me on the spot

I'm sorry, I really didn't enjoy your story.
The main character is a mary-sue: for all her sarcasm, rude-ness, and really kid of pathertically put 'tragic backstory', she manages to get everybody good on her side. Then win said a-hole of a prince.
On the up-side, I enjoyed your humor. It was very well-done.
However your story needs work, I learned to expect in it (obviously) Larayira? (name problem right there, however that is subjective to the person reading it.) Ray (obvious shortening for modern-ness, dobby's from Harry Potter, and Ash has the same problem with his name, aside from the fact I cannot remember for the life of me what his full name is) Ray is bound to fail in absolutely everything, be ridiculously hyper and rude, and arrogant, and proud, and self-centered (and have sweet, docile, shy Anabelle turn into mad stepsister from hell within three seconds- which of course real people do that) yet STILL manage to win the hearts of key people and pass this 'contest'.

I really enjoyed your story and hope you keep writing in future.

Hilarious story! Stobborn un-heroine heroines are the best!

Noooo! She lost her ears and tail. Thats dreadful!
Though if she does not want them, I do. I would happily have them.

I did not think it was terrible.
The 'bloody hell' bit was well timed.

I liked the chapter where she was hyper. My sides hurt from laughing so much.

Neither do I. I would LIKE to have them.

Oh my, such a nice ending to this story :) I really loved the way you wrote at the start, but then in the middle it all got funnily unserious. Not that I disliked it, in fact, I actually like how you wrote Ray as such an idiotic and mental girl that wins the Prince's heart.

I love the ending; no cliche "happily-ever-after"s but just a simple "Hello" to start a new story. Really wonderful :)

Amazing. Typical princess, prince, happily ever after story. But well written. Loved it. :)

awwww this was so sweet! I absolutely loved this fanfic! Kyaaa the descriptions were so realistic and the couple kyaaa