Something about that story was hot...I think it was the vampire bite. I really liked it, it reminds me of my temporary fantasy- Dracula.

That's so awesome. Well done, very well done! I love vampires, and I can totally picture everything clearly in my mind. Great job, and keep up the good work!

Cool story! U said u liked reviews so here is mine:-
Great description, u made the story frightening and suprising.