 Ruana 2003-12-13 . chapter 1oh. i like it. especially the ending.it leaves the poem on a questioning tone and its different and good |
 zelle 2003-12-08 . chapter 1Um, don't. There's too many people you love who would be hurt if you just left like that (I hope).
I say if there's doubt, don't do it.
But, in terms of your poem, YES. Especially the last two lines...DOUBLE YES.
aghk. This feels surreal. Like I'm watching myself type up a stupid review to a spectacular poem (Oh, wait, I am X/).
gerh. |
 Starlight Maiden 2003-12-08 . chapter 1Woah, run away with him? Must it all be so drastic? Well, since this IS a review I suppose I should tell you what I think of it..and it does say a lot...got feeling in it...but woah. I guess only you can decide.. |
 Ishuzu 2003-12-07 . chapter 1Wow. I have no idea what I would do in your possition. What did you do if you have done anything?
I'm Ishuzu. I wrote "April Can't Marry September". You gave me such a nice review *blushes* that I had to come look at your poems. You're really good at showing your feelings to other people in your writing. Continue please |
 Stylish Riot 2003-12-07 . chapter 1Helpless, helpless, helpless...
There's not really alot I can say since I know what's going on. You know my opinion on that matter. And you know I'll happily take your place if you say no... ^_^ |
 Dark Heart Warrior 2003-12-06 . chapter 1Wow...very nice. I figured since you reviewed one of my works I might as well do the same for you! Keep writing and I look forward to reading more. |