This actually reminds me of something that I would write. You can take that however you want to take it. P

A good piece, but I think you could do more with the feeling in it. I get the impression that there's more to it than is actually presented.

very true. you captured a thoguht and made it your own. Well done.

i really like that, it's quite true. only i believe the moments may pass, but we have the memories to stay with us. oops, a rare optimistic statement. oh yeah about my panda poem that you reviewed, that's the way that it uploaded on there, and i dont know how to fix that, sorry. still, your poem was very good!

wow thats a nice poem abt moments i like it alot its got good feelings

Word pictures are vivid. -how do you get the indentations to work? I haven't been able to?

This sounds a lot like where you are right now. Really speaks to what you said about the destabilizing nature of things as they are right now in your life.
An hour forever - so true, how an hour, a minute, a day...can seem to last forever, and then when it's gone, sometimes feels like it never was to begin with.

I like how you dragged on the moment with your indentations.

hey good poem, flows well i and i really like the layout :) Keep writing