..Hahahaha... nice..

hahahaha aw. :)
that's cute. :D
thanks for the awesome oneshot! :) :]

Aww! Cute. :)

oh, this is so wonderfully and simply cute! Thank you for all of your hard work and dedication in writing this; you're such a talented author ^_^

such a cute idea! LOved it.

Wow. I love it. Especially the part about the Irishman.

HEY!
Aw! Tht is unbelieveably (or how ever ya spell it :P) cute! lol seriously loved this one-shot, you're awesome!
Well, have a gd week!
BYE!!
x x x

“What’s your reason for kissing me in the bookstore? You weren’t on an aphrodisiac,” I said between kisses.

“Sure I was,” James answered. “You are my aphrodisiac and I am happily addicted.”

- so cute. ^_^

sweet!

Great short story! It would actually make for a pretty good regular story if changed around just a bit. Anyway, thanks for a great read ^_^

HAHA! Lovely short story! And I'm glad to see some Canadian representation... too often you run into so many American stories on FP you start thinking... what of us? We're friendlier anyway =P

No no, that's just jokes... I'm not Canadian... but I will be soon, hopefully! I should be taking my citizenship in a year! Wo!

Anyway, like I was saying, great short story! Very, very funny (not in the lol way but then... hey! If that happened in real life to someone I know... I would roll around in the floor laughing!) and like you said, cute too. Madison's fantasies are certainly interesting... peel clothes off with your teeth? My, my! If her mother only knew! =D

Awesome!

awesome story! very sexy! i like it!

Omg, I love it! I like reading semi-smutty stuff and I was looking for a good read today. Thank god I found yours! I love it, is it possible that a sequel is in the works? Errmm..just hoping. Anyway, good job. Write something really good again!

hahahaha.
unrealistic? As you said, certainly
hilarious? beyond words.
love it!

LOVE IT! Haha, who cares if it isn't realistic? Like you said, that's why it's fiction, and it's hilarious. Besides, I sadly know the feeling... (don't ask.. you compare guys to Adonis? My friends and I check out asses when we're bored, lol. We have actually used the term 'biteable' in conversation, and I've had some pretty freaky dreams o.O. Good job on this. :)
- Murphy