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| Red Champagne 2008-08-20 ch 1,  | abuseha ha. that's really cute. |
| emotionless-stares 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is cute. She didn't need it eh? |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuseOMG cute! i love ya! xx |
| icey-choo 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseLove it! Oh, wow...love it so much! :) |
| Itsa Mia 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abusenice. funny. this is the perfect story for me, seriously... *off to apply for position and bookstore...* |
| Dark Emo Shadow 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseyay so sweet un you just love the ones how she fall in love with her enemy! |
| Cecilyatheart 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseWhew! That was the hotness right there! Good job on that short. Very fun to read. |
| The Professionals 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abusehahha!! i loved it!! i use to work at a chapters too! at least you got the santa clause hat, i had antlers for reindeer hahah~! great story! |
| kingrankar76 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI love all your one-shots. Please write more in the future. Ooh and I love Judith McNaught too. I love happy endings |
| rainfromheaven 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseVery cute and sweet and fluffy. :) And no, I didn't think it was unrealistic at all. You also did very well with the character development, and that's saying a lot for a short story. |
| mia5081 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseHaha, that was funny and cute :D ~Mia |
| Agape.Philios.Eros 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseAww, this is such a cute story. Yeah, it was about sex and whatnot, but the end was just adoreable. In addition, it is very well written and it's very easy to get into a character. Good job! |
| fantasy4luvr 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abusenice ending |
| Juni Lyn 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseAww such a cute story, you're right not really realistic but hey that's what fiction is for. I enjoyed it. I also see the potential for it becoming more than that short of a story. |
| sunflowersing 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseI love that last line that James says. sunflowersing |