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| Seylin 2004-01-09 ch 1, | abuseWow! I loved it! Very well written & the expression was amazing! Now onto the other one! |
| Punky Monkey 2003-12-06 ch 1, | abuseGood poem i like the different length lines. Keep writing :) |
| Dragon Ladysupreme 2003-12-06 ch 1, | abusehey ya heard what i said before. Would it be accurate to say fukai no fukai, because it is one of the deepest i have read. |
| frugale 2003-12-06 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Your prose is elegant like ... velvet. |