|Reviews for Staring|
| Tired Recluse 12/6/03 . chapter 1
The last line was a little.. abrupt, but that makes it better. Give the reader a suprise. Heh-heh. Keep writing!
| Tutube 12/6/03 . chapter 1
Awesome poem, and very well written. my favorite lines were those 4 lines:
"You think you are so much better
Because you're older than me
anyways, good job, keep it up! _