Reviewer Date Chapter Type
Silvi 2004-01-19 1 Anonymous
I really, really like your poem. I dont know much on how to give review on poem but Ill try my best...I was once told that for a good poem there has to be a red line that conects the whole piece, theres not necessery a visible one but still... your poem, to me, has that not to mention the imagery the words provocted in me. I wouldnt be lieing if I told you that one of the reason I like it is because there is a flow in the piece, a rythm. So what would be my rating?
Arrmaitee 2003-12-14 1 Signed
That was really beautiful. BRAVO! I said it before - you have a true sense of the human condition. That's a rare gift. One of the things that I've learned as an author is that we all have strengths. Mine is comedy, yours is insight. Use it!

very true. but it will never happen. keep dreaming though.

Imagery was very apparent, and it read almost like a melody.