 Seven strings 2004-11-27 . chapter 1 No offence but your poems are all about rain, time, war and love. I would like to see you write something different. |
 tahayov 2004-03-11 . chapter 1another unique peom for u..god u really do have ur style..this one is about an everyday issue but we never think of writting about it.u put that down in a great way.lovely just lovely..hope u could r & r some of my work plz :) |
 Keep it 100 2003-12-19 . chapter 1All the images you used did create the perfect setting for a downpour. I liked it.
~Heart of the Sword |
 LegendaryPunk29 2003-12-11 . chapter 1Nice, nice, well written! I liked it a lot. I do have a poem called "Rainfall" which is about rainfall and some otha stuff...which u might dunt wanna kno bout. Neway nice work here, keep writing!
Thanks for da review on my poem! it really means a lot to me! Thanks SOO much! |
 unjour 2003-12-11 . chapter 1 really vivid description of the rain... |
 To-Speak 2003-12-10 . chapter 1:: sigh :: i love the rain... but it almost NEVER rains here...
you're very good at discribing things.
this is a very good piece of yours and i hope you continue writing
::Thumbs up:: |
 Children of the Root 2003-12-09 . chapter 1great work. It describes rain so well. |
 Jimmy Jazz 2003-12-09 . chapter 1I don't like it, I love it, fantastic work. |
 mizu no kokoro 2003-12-07 . chapter 1really nice~ rain is sad, yet watery~ heh heh~
~Never the same~ |
 Chambered emotions 2003-12-07 . chapter 1awesome...you used many of your sences to write this and this is what makes the reader sence everything you senced. Good Job |