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| Infinite Smiles 2004-05-18 ch 1, | I felt the air, Traces, Marks, Of what you left behind, A broken heart, A shadow of love, Of passion. I especially love those lines. The summary was right on..short, but very good. |
| Happy-Platipus 2004-04-13 ch 1, | Whoa... This is really good! It flows in a really cool way! It needs a tune! |
| Aftin 2004-01-26 ch 1, | I suppose you have hit the new worlds eternal question...we have all been there...nice with the chorus! |
| JupGrrl 2004-01-13 ch 1, | The first part struck me the most- "I take a breath, all I get is air". I like this. I think it really conveys the confusion and frustration and that terrible feeling of being alone when you feel like you love someone and they are unaware of it or have rejected you. |
| Sunflower Philosophy 2003-12-20 ch 1, | You sent me this one didn't you. I remember. I love how it ends on a positive note- "so believe in me, believe in you, believe in trust"... 'cause it doesn't really matter whether or not we actually exist... what's important is what we believe. And you know I can really identify with the feeling... a lot... m~* Sunflower, anyone? |