It was lovely. Wonderfully written, great plot, well-defined characters. I liked it a whole bunch! Continue writing... please. :)

Hey, didn't you have a sequel to this one started? It'd be cool if you started it over or something. Just saying... (cuz I really liked it:))

This is interesting.

I like your story but your ending just doesn't really seem to fit in with the rest of the story :-/ eh i dunno i probaly sound really stupid

okay so i just read your story and i feel offended! i'm from kentucky and we aren't just some poor country hobos, so please find a better analogy.

I loved this story :D It's so sad to think that I wont be able to stalk these charactors through this story anymore D:

But i still loved it :D

aw... i wish it was his own body though. it kinda sucks coz it's eiji's body. but overall love this story. enjoyed reading this.:D

OK loophole!

""You mean the 'I'll grant you three wishes then go back to my lamp' genies? ... She had walked up to him and was scanning him head to toe. ..."

"I haven't taken off the spell on your legs yet you know.""

So if she was still bound by the spell, how did she supposedly "walk[ing] up to him"?

A beautiful, orignial story - a bit bittersweet at the end. Keep writing!

Hey, a couple of quick things on spelling deja vu and etc. (for et cetera, which is latin).

I absolutely loved it! :) I actually cried when Kyushin and Miori said goodbye after their year together and I wished Miori didn't wish that she'd forget Kyushin. If only Miori remembered him at the end of the story. I cried a lot of times when I read this. I loved it! What happened to the sequel? When I tried looking for it, It wasn't there. Did you take it down?

Please reply:)

haha the story is cool.. but in japanese school is not the student who change classes .. is the teacher... so they will be always with the same class

AH!

I LOVED THE STORYY :]

i really do wish that she remembered him though :[

hi! (:

I had finished To Stay Below The Sea when I saw that you had written some other stuff, so I went to your profile and read this.

All in all, I'd have to say this story was not as great as To Stay Below The Sea. The idea was pretty cool-I haven't seen a story about a genie before.

However, some of it was a little overdone. Her color-changing eyes, how it started off with her outdoing all those boys in basketball.

Unfortunately, I found myself a little bored by the first chapter. I kept going along but there weren't too many surprises.

I'd be convinced you were just some half-talented Fictionpress writer if I hadn't read To Stay Under The Sea; now *that* was a real story. This was a Fictionpress story.

So to sum it up, I hope I haven't hurt your feelings or made you mad; I was just trying to be honest. Please don't consider this a flame. Please keep writing, I'd like to see other stuff from you.

Damn. Seriously. . .daamn. This is the second story in the entire fictionpress that I'm actually really really attached to. I seriously and completely love this story. Would you believe me if I told you that I've read the entire thing through three times? I'll admit that the first time around that the ending disappointed me slightly, but then. .it's a unique ending, not one of those sappy silly ones or predictable ones. I like it- the entire story. The chemistry between the characters, the characters personalities and the storyline itself. Great job on the story and I hope you continue to write more wonderful storys(yes, I've checked out your other stories as well and now you're offically on my author alert list)