"And whisper to me the sleep of dreams." Powerful line!
I loved the last section in particular. :)

It's beautiful, the calm that is asked for in the speaker's plea to the ocean is reflected nicely in the words, the natural and unobtrusive rhymes and the gentle rhythm. The thought might not be entirely new, but you have shaped it into a unique and original work of art. Good job.

Your summary rang true. Great job -- this is really a nice change from the more hard-hitting death-realted poetry.
~God bless~

I liked the simple mood here.
~Heart of the Sword