aw wow, that was cute, but this last chapter really needs to be edited

awesome...simply awesome...
i love your story it definitely needs to get published...

by the way...i love your taste in songs...i m a huge fan of Nirvana and orgy,...

i'll say this again...your story is AWESOME...

Very good story, I enjoyed reading it this evening, instead of working like I should have been doing. :P However it's such a shame that you rushed through the last chapter. It could have been good but so many words are missing that it's frustrating to read and ruins the pleasure of reading the ending. Your story deserves better than that. Here are just a FEW of the examples I copied from the last chapter.

"'re a you're going to shine like will fall in love with you, like how I 're gonna light up the stage

" like how you did on me prove myself." He pleaded.

"It reminds me of and sparkling." Adrian said

"Let me show you who I really your faith in me again.

they knew that they had knew that they were strong together

If you have the time it would be worth just reading through it again and filling in the gaps. :) but welldone on all the other chapters!

I absolutely loved this :D I'm so sad that it's over though. I'm in love with Adrian :)

Seriously awesome! :D

luved it XD!

sounds pretty good :}!!XD!

I loved it!!

I really enjoyed this. I am glad you write.

--Hana

I really do like this story. I like the way you aren't making it a typical romance, sorta of a master/slave love, you know?

I hve one question: Is this the way you think goths are like? IT's sounds more punk to me.

THat is my only comment. I will keep on going!

--Hana

This was really good, i loved it. it was very well thought out, and it turned out well!

Hey! I just have to say, I loved your story. It was so sweet. I have one request, I have a story posted, and i know it's not very good, but I would like your opinion on how I could make it better and everything. I always take constuctive critisism very well.

An amazing story. The title suits it perfectly. I love how you brought a new spark to this almost cliche storyline. It's beautifully written. You should honestly consider submitting it to a publisher. ^_^

Aw..very touching story. Keep up the good work. ^^

Kickarse story. I know I'm a little late, but my friend just pointed out this story. She's a little dim...Good story!

This story is the most sweetest story i have ever read. It made me cry at the end. aaw