wow... can relate... i like how you write

I really like how this poem moves... You use a lot of great description, and this seems like it really could be the last thoughts of someone who suffocated themself. My favorite lines are "Why don't they come? I don't want to die, why did I tie it so close?" So let down, and wanting an escape... :'( Realization too late... I like the second last line as well. Write on! (thnx 4 the review)

Neat poem. Sounds more like a cry for help than an actual suicide attempt--which can be equally as dangerous. Reminds me of trying to run away from home just to get attention ~.~;
I like your writing; very unique.

Nice. I just came back from a really gay XMAS party, so this makes me feel better. (Isn't that weird?)
Love ya,
Rionarayne

If you take the time to try to discover another person and not jump to conclusions or be hypocritical you will find out a lot more.
I didn't save the e-mail ,so I have no idea what I said. I am a careful polite person kind and sweet. I am sure you took the "knife" stuff out of context. I do not care about knives, I have only been ion one fight and that was in 8th grade and I was defending myself. I have a Swiss army knife I keep at work to open boxes is all. Notice long ago I deleted my two knife poems "Her" and "I the Knife" so what do you think? You are a strange person.
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I will try to review more of your stuff.
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Funny how you say in your profile how you hate depressing negative stuff. Look at this new poem. Kind of hypocritical, don't you think?
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Anyway, I do not judge people so easily. I just thought with all your negative comments you didn't like me, so instead of saying mean things back, I just clam up.
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nice poem, tho!

wow, very dark and deep. i like all the thoughts and questions inbetween. very well written, keep writing!