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Damascus Ochre 2004-06-17 . chapter 1
Wow. Sappiness! X.x
Haha, you know I'm not into sap, but there's a tinge of "I WANT YOU" angst that I understand. *shrugs* Bleh, we all get that...
Anyway, likey again! Dammit, iono how you make sap actually look GOOD...x.x;;
~ Kit ~
i was a postcard 2004-05-03 . chapter 1
Oh, so pretty. "Aching sugar-spun ice" That's a brilliant line.
FuriKuriPillows 2004-01-19 . chapter 1
I love the song! Hey, can I mess with it? I can probably add a guitar backing. canIcanIplease? *amused by his girlish squealing* No one heard that.
Umi
AntiPleasure 2003-12-14 . chapter 1
*muah muah* VERY NICE! You've managed to describe a chilling/love affect in every verse, and I like that. A very good song, I can't write any for **
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly 2003-12-13 . chapter 1
oh, very beautiful. I love december, apart from having my birthday in it (HORRAY FOR THE 16TH) I love how dead, monochromatic, and solitary everything is... I just hate the coldness ><
What can I say, I love the poem :)
Tokiko
arc arsenal 2003-12-08 . chapter 1
very very well written, you've obviosly put alot of thought into this piece and it shows, well done
fontanellemonster 2003-12-08 . chapter 1
Oh, that's absolutely beautiful. I adore it, it's cute, visual and you have a great sense of rythm. You're cool.
mizu no kokoro 2003-12-07 . chapter 1
cute~ i can hear it now~ ^^ very nice
~Never the same~
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