Overall ~ I like! :-) So many things happen like that and all the heart ache that you felt shows in your poem. The disbelief how you can care for someone so much, and the thoughts about them killing you (maybe, not physically, but emotionally...)are so real! It was beautiful (I think I use that word too much, but I will find a new one soon) ~ I loved it: Keep it up!

hey :p nice poem... Everything you write now is depressing lol :( the poem reminds me of me and frederick.. when i was thinking of killing myself beacuse of him. stupid biyatch he was.. hopefully now that you're over ryan you will be able to move on and forget about him like i SORT OF did for fred..lmfao PEACE OUT MARIA