This is some good stuff. I love "the screeching of bikes and cars, of clicks and flashes." Pretty imagery. *thumbs up*

That was was very good poem. This is the fisrt thing I have read on this site, and I'm putting it on my favorites.

Wow... I have NEVER seen someone do a poem like the way you did it. @_@ you're so creative, and extremely talented. You just have your way of words that amazes me. It's so mystical, yet angsty, and I love it. It really keeps you wondering towards the end...@_@ you're a great poet.

OMg... that was a wonderful message. I think we all need a reminder of how important our lives really are to us. And wow, I'm very surprised by how you made the poem flow so well, even with the rhymeschemes. I can never do that lol, good job at that. Beautiful poem.