Reviews for Becoming the Brandon Bride

Reviews For: Becoming the Brandon Bride - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

Venus Smurf1 2008-03-03 ch 1,	Loved it, but desperately wishing you'd update. Fantastic beginning, but I need more!
Shadows in the Fire 2008-02-12 ch 1,	Awesome. Really awesome. It's original, it's quirky, it's GOOD. Which is a rare find on FP these days. Can't wait to see where this goes. -Shadow P.S. I feel like I want to smash it in your face, but only so I can get your attention and make you update it. Otherwise I'm checking the "Loved it" box.
TheSkyIsGreen 2007-11-25 ch 2,	horrified What... what!? You haven't updated such a wonderful story in three, almost four, years? I'm ashamed of you!
InsaneRomantic15 2007-11-01 ch 2,	I am going to chop you into little bloody pieces if you do not update this amazing story, very, very, very, soon. Got it? Good.
Right or Ryn 2006-12-16 ch 2,	You said, and I quote : "I’m still going to be finishing it. I will never give up on any of my stories." Will you live up to your word, or was that just an empty promise? I sincerely hope you continue with this story even though it has been around what? two years. Please continue.
Bree 2006-07-12 ch 2,	I LOVE this story
Dirty White Belt 2006-01-03 ch 2,	Oh how could you leave me here!?I NED more of this story!I shall die without it!Ha, okay, I guess I won't, but still, I MUST have more!Thanks! DWB
B.T. Lines 2005-12-30 ch 2,	Did you abandon this story? I sure hope not! The first two chapters are really good. You should post some more chapters. (Not so subtly hinting, but I wanna read more!) You are on my author alert list so gey crackin'.
Nelly29 2005-10-22 ch 2,	i love! plz update!
cOoCoO 2005-10-04 ch 2,	Can you update please. This is a really cool story. Please don't leave us hanging like this...wa...
anon 2005-09-28 ch 2,	UPDATE!
Death Princess 2005-09-11 ch 2,	im tired yawn and i still havent done my hw sigh elise brandon seems a bit cough extreme i mean handcuffing ur son 2 a bed now thts well cruel and strangely amusing. btw in wat time period is this set? i wasnt exctly sure if it was present or historical :p leticia's grandmama is evil. and leticias funny i mean stealing he grandmamas apples then selling them back 2 her thts evil. ok my bed is callin me so ill be off 2 sleep now toodles!PS. oh and plz UPDATE 1 or all of ur stories soon
Julz 2005-09-05 ch 1,	Hey springish i absoulately loved your story it is so cool, i cant wait to hear the end of it.byez
Eveiveneg 2005-07-02 ch 2,	This actually seems pretty good... But the fact that it hasn't been updated in nearly nine months is kind of disappointing. I really was looking forward to reading this... Take pity on a poor soul and continue sometime soon? I would do more, but puppy dog faces kind of disturb me. They belong on little dogs, not people. -Eveiveneg
Kelly 2005-06-26 ch 2,	Although only on the second chapter, I'm really enjoying this story. I wish I had read it earlier! I actually just found out you had written this today. Leticia certainly doesn't practice filial piety, but that's great. I know that once in a blue moon, I wouldn't mind telling some cantankerous elderly person to "shove it." Mind you, I wouldn't, but that's not the point.Anyway, I find your characters, quite interesting, despite only just being introduced to them. I also like how you switch between 1st person and 3rd person. I know that it's aggravating (for me) to choose which perspective to write in, especially when I want to have mulitple pov's, but having more than two 1st person pov's seems to make the story a bit too busy. Wow, I'm rambling (a bad habit of mine). My point: I like your point of view system.All right, to wrap it up, I like your story; plot, characters, tone, and all. I hope you update it sometime, whenever you get the chance! Good luck!

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