did you write this while feeling the same emotion as in this piece, no emotion, or completly different emotion? I just want to know. Its good.

powerful. good stream of conciousness story. :)
ever hear of frank e. peretti's _this present darkness_ and _piercing the darkness_? your story reminds me of what those books would be in first person. kinda the whole supernatural demons and angels talking to humans kind of thing.
but maybe i'm just reading too far into it. haha it's fun though. :) great job!

Heh, I write stuff like that all the time...it's satisfying writing it, some people see it as nonsensical but it *obviously* makes perfect sense to you. It was cool. Thanks for posting it.

nice, nice I liked it, altho I dunno if this is a poem or this is a story. It was kinda weird, but i like ur ideas. Nice work here, keep writing!!
If u can, plz r and r some of my work too, it will mean a lot to me!
Thanks!