very nice. another exellent poem. :3

u let me read it before you put it up here and i guess that makes me special lol. i think this is brilliantly written and you get your point across very well, as always. I have felt like that many times, you even said to me that everyone has that kind of a day at least once. i think you're right. anyways, good job and i cant wait for more. as long as its not mushy stuff about caitlin lol...

That was brilliant Nick. It was unbelievably powerful.