wow...that was... yeah.
even though you had to read to the very end to fully understand it.
nice job...

:( that is so sad, you have alot of feeling in this

Hm... It was certainly interesting. I wish I knew what it was about, but it was good. Sad, but good. I liked all the references to whiteness.
~Flip flop
PS: Evanescence is god stuff :)