Good imagery. I like it a lot.

pretty format.. sad poem.. short, but powerful

hm... It's quick and consise, but still expresses so much emotion. You are a very talented poet.
Blessed be...
Henna

wow... that was .. different. i still liked it, but it a weird way, like peanut butter and mayonaisse sandwiches. you like it but it's weird... well i liek it... try it sometime.

*applauds*
nice

wow thats sad