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| NirvanaChick6794 2004-06-16 ch 13,   | Wow! When do we get to find out what happend to Clyde?! |
| truthsquad 2004-05-03 ch 1, | This seems like a really awesome story so far, but there is something awfully fishy about Clyde... yikes! I'm scared to know what is it... lol. :\ Anyways...please update soon. :) |
| NirvanaChick6794 2004-04-07 ch 12, | Hey I Love this I can't wait to read more!! |
| singergirl22 2004-04-05 ch 12, | OMG i love this story it is so cute aw can dave n heather hook up plz! lol keep up the wonderful work! |
| girl-23 2004-04-04 ch 12, | I like the story idea, but I dont like how she's only 13 and she's practically having sex and stuff, but whatever. Cool. |
| FAKE?romances 2004-04-04 ch 12, | oh! les mis! that being said, i LOVE this story. this chapter was really sad and really good and really emotional...nice. |
| MoonFerret 2004-03-05 ch 11, | Oh! *is on edge of her seat* I will beat you with a Trout if you do not update soon!! :) I'm falling head-over-heels in love with this story. Keep it up, OR ELSE! ;) ~M.F. |
| soupjoker 2004-03-03 ch 11, | I love it I have no idea where you're going with this tho, but I'm excited to find out! I'm going to assume that the 're-meeting' will occur sometime in the next few chapters. I LOVE IT! whoo. me |
| Not so Average 2004-02-24 ch 1, | Thank you for adding me to your favorite authors list! I tried to add you, but I don't know how. *Tear*. Thanks again, though, and I really like what you added on to your story. It's different in a good way. You should be proud. |
| MoonFerret 2004-02-19 ch 1, | Love it, love it, love it!! It's very intimate, you described it perfectly and the make-out scenes weren't choppy, they flowed together well. Some parts of the dialogue went too fast, (like when Keith trys to 'rape' Heather), slow it down a bit more..I want to know more about Heather/Clyde's outside life (their families, why Clyde seems to mysterious but intimate). Keep it up! ;) |
| soupjoker 2004-02-19 ch 10, | Cute, very very cute! It bothers me slightly how it's been mere days but they're so intimate. How can they be in love what with knowing so little about the other? REALLY AWESOME tho, I LOVE it. me |
| soupjoker 2004-02-19 ch 1, | OOh, catchy. I like the opening. Is she a "goth" or something? The wifebeater was an off-throwing touch. I like it a LOT off to read more, me |
| Not so Average 2003-12-09 ch 6, | Loved this! It was really weird though but weird in a cool way. Tip: in the first chapter, you say they're "making love" but that means they're having sex and well it wouldn't fit into the context. A bit confusing there... |