it's his world. you should expand more, do your writing.

...Beautiful, and touching... And somehow, amazingly, believable. It's sad at the end... Pretty emotional.

Nicely done.

I usually don't know what to say in reviews so i'll just leave it at this: amazing.

I have tears in my eyes after reading this. It evoked memories of my own childhood, with my sister telling me hypnotic stories from the top bunk and my brother sometimes pretending to be a sort of dog-creature called Moofy. But this is an excellent mini-adventure. I hope you publish this.

Wow... probably one of the best-written stories I've read for a long time. Poor Roger...

Wow. That was so very beautiful. Not just the story itself, but also the way you write. It's quite breath taking. Now you have me wondering...
FxC
April Thursday

How pretty.. What if it's true?

Oh, sweet kids. You know I love my crazy people, so of course this got to me. I like Roger a lot - I'd like to know him better. I have this mental picture of him on the edge of a cliff, and of course it's windy, and his face just looks vaguely puzzled and sad.
I'd like to see it real. Roger's world, I mean, his brother's world. Not the anime dimension-jumping kind of real, but the quiet one where nobody knows. Did you ever seen the movie "Don Juan De Marco" with Johnny Depp? Not a particularly good movie, but a really fun concept. You could make this one helluva story playing with a world like that. Yes real, no real, maybe everybody dies at the end, maybe they just flew away. I’d just hate to see the dream beat out.

I feel like I should kiss you on the cheek, and help the boy in your story find his wings.

::picks jaw up off of ground::
That was great! Wonderful portrayal of emotions.

But in a way, it can't be true... oh well. Great story. That was written extremely well--amazing job.
Freedman

Wow, really well-written, and really sad, especially if it's true. It isn't fragmented or over-explanatory or spelled etc., wrong...it flows and is just so well-written.
And full of emotion, great job.

**in shocked silence**
That was really...really..good. I am very impressed! I have never read anything as good as this in a long time, great job!