Depressing... very depressing... poor Sunny! *cries* it's still a wonderfully wrought story though. Thanks for the reivew, btw Kitsune is at ch. 11! -Pyra

Wonderfully written.
The quiet suspense leaves the readers in thrall without really knowing why... the ideas are beautifully developed.
Keep writing!

Ooh... a future Dystopia. Very topical and very well-wrtiten. Nice.

Interesting look at what happens when lies become the norm--I like. I do wonder, perhaps, exactly what would happen to those who spoke out against it (though immediate execution seems quite likely.) It's an almost Freudian piece, and it gives one a lot to think about. I wonder--maybe this is all contained in that little novel River was reading? Eh, I guess I'll never know...

Love it! update! And thank you so much for ur advice and opinions on my stories. Well, please update soon. ^^

You really caught my attention with this wonderful piece. It's simply wonderful. Keep up the good work. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo

Wow
I am REALLY impressed. this was excellent. If you're intending on writing more (please say yes! ^_^) I'd love to see it.