|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| SweetGrape 2003-12-10 ch 1, | aw- cute:) I've never seen snow, so poems about it always intrigue me (even if humans clear away the nature just as we're realising how exquisite it is) It's a very magical description- 'as if time had stopped', 'spirit lifted'- beautifully enchanting:) |
| cosmo-queen 2003-12-09 ch 1, | Very good poem. How annoying it is to be enchanted by nature, only to be interrupted by humanity. You conveyed this well. Keep up the good work :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Jessica 2003-12-09 ch 1, | One of my favs of yours. YAY! i have a line about the plow in one of mine too.. read and review! haha just kidding |