 AVIGON 2004-01-05 . chapter 1That last line definitely made it worthwhile. Nothing like anything I've ever seen before. |
 Mime 2004-01-02 . chapter 1Ai, I read Root and Anjeni's tyburn too, and I am also amazed by them, as I am by yours. |
 Keep it 100 2003-12-19 . chapter 1I really do like this form. Very nice.
~Heart of the Sword |
 glitterjewele 2003-12-18 . chapter 1this is really cool! i've never seen this format before, it's neat, it fascinates me. :P the last little bit "i can't hold on to you" was awesome, i wasn't expecting it at all, gave the piece a lot more depth to add to the great sounds and images. excellent poem! |
 crazyflower 2003-12-14 . chapter 1I can't put my finger on why I like this so much...it's simple, yet effective. It seems to me to capture some sort of desperation or frenzy because of the repetition. Anyway. I like. I think I might do one now, because I thought that was so interesting. Thanks to you and Children of the Root |
 Miz E. Mak 2003-12-11 . chapter 1That is really cool! I've never written one of these before, so I might someday...I love this one. It is so eerie, so desperate, so frightening...it is awesome imagery that just put me in that moment. great job here.
write on. |
 The Black Rider 2003-12-11 . chapter 1I've never read a Tyburn before, so maybe I'm just virgin to this kind of writing, but I didn't like the repitition that much. It sort of got on my nerves after a while. Maybe I'm not being open-minded enough. Sorry. |
 Lidless Eye 2003-12-10 . chapter 1A very interesting style... I love it. Excellent job, keep it up!
~Lidless Eye |
 Jimmy Jazz 2003-12-10 . chapter 1CotR's was brilliant, and this was no less than. Very creepy, a love it. |
 Children of the Root 2003-12-09 . chapter 1I like it! Awesome work. I love the second to last line. Its so cool. |