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| DevilsSinGodsDie 2004-05-13 ch 1,   | i think, and i know, great poem, sorry i didn't review it when you wrote it. you did a great job, oh and don't care what they think. |
| Lost Soldier REVAMPED 2004-04-09 ch 1, | when this makes sense, tell me alright |
| unwritten 2004-02-11 ch 1, | its so true, and only about ourselves, i know i think these things about other people, because from the outside they seem to have no real problems. but i know if i wanted i could find something that they are really struggling with, we all have our demons to fight, its just that some aren't visible, and some poeple don't talk about them. anyway, nice poem, i enjoyed it. |
| jonathan william jr sheffie... 2004-02-09 ch 1, | wow you are a really skilled writer,let your light shine seriously i love this one i can relate so much :) your great. |
| Traced In Green 2004-01-03 ch 1, | Ha, so true! I loved it, it's really good. Thanx for reviewing. Keep writing! luvs JP |
| eupseudes 2004-01-02 ch 1, | SUMMARY: A nice repetition poem, made outstanding by the subtle rhyming. CONTENT: Very true, very true GRAMMAR: This is a poem, so you can use your poetic license! OVERALL: This is one of the kinds of poems that I love! It makes you think about all the things you're not and how others perceive you. And it also conveys other messages all around! Very subtle and thoughtful poem! "You do not know." |
| Taelianessa 2003-12-09 ch 1, | That's how I feel at school... So many people have made assumptions about me without getting to know me and it really bothers me.. But that's a whole other story. Very nice work here, keep it up! |
| musicchic 2003-12-09 ch 1, | oh my gosh this poem is so good! its exactly how i feel. Keep writing u have a great gift |