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| P.H. Wise 2003-12-13 ch 1,   | More showing, less telling. It's one thing to talk about mob mentality. It's another thing to show it with powerful imagery. |
| KittenX 2003-12-12 ch 1, | Wow thanks for stating the obvious in such a trite fashion... |
| The Jack of Spades 2003-12-10 ch 1, | You make quite a point. For that - and for such a well-written poem - brava to you! |