Awesome! This is really wel written and very unique. I loved your descriptions and details. Excellent work!

This was a really well written short story. It has a clear beginning, middle and end yet is very original. The detail at the beginning really hooked me, it made me want to know more about Hela. This story reminds me of Marion Zimmer Bradley in a way, with the falcons... Anyway, this is great, I am surprised you have no reviews on this yet!