 Citanya 2005-05-16 . chapter 1Powerful feelings, a very nice Christian poem unlike many others I've seen on fictionpress. The feeling of wanting to be clean is very powerfully expressed. I study Latin too, by the way. :) |
 beautiful dream 2005-05-06 . chapter 1Ooh. I can relate. I absolutely love it. That's what I say all the time. Right before I jump in the mud. :P It's awesome. Please R&R mine? :D
~ Alliane |
 Aslan Israel 2004-08-23 . chapter 1I like how at first, you talk about using earthly things to get yourself "clean", but in the end, you know that God's the only one who can make you clean in the end. At least, that's how i interpreted it.
God Bless |
 sensitiveangel 2004-08-01 . chapter 1this is how i feel sometimes...great poem! i love it! |
 Caitir 2004-01-04 . chapter 1wonderful!! amazing, great, peachy, good, wow, awesome... any of those words. |
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