I read the reviews to this. Sometimes "having issues" can be good. It makes the writing more interesting. I found this piece to be sadistically beautiful within itself. Reading into it, the truths are harsh. Seems like a piece dealing with rape and violence, written beautifully. Only you could pull it off.

I personally think this is a powerful and demanding piece. You are a poet, and word things so beautifully no matter how many people say you have issues. Well, maybe you do. Who knows really but yourself, and if you DID have issues, why release them through poem form? ::glares:: And people just need to get over themselves, and are too afraid that you might "type" something to offend them. Anonymous reviewers are just pansies. Wonderful poem.

I like the voice of it, the pure poetic symbolic language.
we had an earlier discussion about my toughts on the "c" word, and we talk, so ...
So, I get you a little bit and you know what I allow you to know (Mwa-hahaha - no really, you know what I mean, hun).
So ... I can safely say this is a very good poem for you, no kidding! I would not entertain the idea of censoring it or (god forbid) deleting it. I think it is awsome! ::cuddles::
and no, I am not "Simon"! SIN maybe (cue lightening and my spokesperson Elvira)

Look who's talking. Wouldn't YOU like to know?

Someone has some issues...

Wah! Kill the **!! -falls over- The images from the sort of...demands in this one made me think of a monster feeding from a young girl...I love it!!