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| Hannah 2005-01-28 ch 8, anon. | abuseDEL! Where are you? It's been FOREVER since you've updated. I'm dying to know what's happening to Delia! UPDATE, I COMMAND IT! |
| eylsebennet 2004-12-21 ch 8,  | abuseok, so i started reviewing when this was on fanfiction, and i'm not giving up now. you HAVE to UPDATE!! and please have edain come in soon, i so dearly love that cat. anyway, i really like the way the story is going so far, and i can't wait to see where is goes from here. GOOD JOB!! |
| Ruby 2004-09-05 ch 8, anon. | abuseDon't you think you should update now? I do. ~Ruby Ps. If not, tell us! |
| Salt and Vinegar Pringles 2004-08-21 ch 8, | abuseI liked your story, very much so! Do you plan on updating soon? Cause you really should... |
| aalewis 2004-04-10 ch 7, | abuseCome on everyone, help me! UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE! |
| aalewis 2004-04-10 ch 6, | abuseUPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE! |
| aalewis 2004-04-10 ch 5, | abuseAll right, thats it, I'm **. UPDATE NOW! You can't just leave people hanging like that. IT'S NOT ALLOWED! And if you really have quit for good, then at least say something, so I don't have to check back here to see if you've updated or not! |
| aalewis 2004-03-08 ch 4, | abuseHm... This chapter, I liked everything! As usual. I liked the bit where she has the dream. That was creepy and eerie. And i liked when Delia was trying not to turn into the cougar. And when she works the spell. Oh, and EEdain, he's funny. The conversations between him and Delia are hilarious. Oh, and that bit where the nerdy guy asks her for a kiss. I thought that was a nice touch. You've done a very good job of developing your characters. My only complaints are these- first, I wasn't exatly sure why Delia was suddenly so motivated to get rid of the spell on EEdain. And, my second more serious complaint- UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! |
| Ruby 2004-03-07 ch 8, anon. | abusePLEASE UPDATE! its been far too long! ~Ruby |
| aalewis 2004-03-04 ch 3, | abuseHa-ha! That was a nice mini plot twist. I must say, Arevn seemed to good to be true. I like that bit where Delia is freaking out and having flash backs in the cage. However, I thought that it was a little sudden how she told Arven about her, uh, 'powers' so suddeley, cuz I mean, we your adoring reveiwers (hint:update soon) wern't expecting that at all. But I'm glad the cat saved her. Eadain, rather. And I like where he asks Delia to call him by his name. Do I dedect the start of a beautiful friendship. (Though we'll never know if you don't update.) |
| aalewis 2004-02-28 ch 2, | abuseOkay I have a confession to make. I am a really bad reveiwer. I have actually read all eight chapters of your story, but I only left a reveiw for the first one. Now I am going to go back and leave a reveiw for every chapter in the hop that it inspires you to get off you butt and write more! Anyway, loved this chapter. I like the talking cat. Talking animals arn't very original but in your case there is an exception. Oh, and I didn't suspect Arven at all, until- "Arven looked at the cat with distaste. "I'm allergic to cats," he said." Now I am starting to beleive the cat. Yeah, I'm still reading, so keep writing! ^_^ |
| Ruby 2004-02-25 ch 8, anon. | abuse*coughupdatecough* ~Ruby |
| aalewis 2004-02-08 ch 1, | abuseWords can't describe. I loved this, it was amazing. It was funny to. The whole 'don't throw the scroll out the window' thing. And when I was reading, I kept expecting to have to turn the page, you know, like it was a real book, that's how good it was. And I'm only on the first chapter! Anyway, normally i only reveiw for people who have r&r my story, but I caught sight of a reveiw you left for one of my reveiwers and it had me rolling. (The one you left for Sinai-rain, about King Blah.) I mean King Blah? So I figured, anyone with a sense of humor as good as that has to be a good writer too. lol |
| MorganRay 2004-01-23 ch 8, anon. | abusethis is evolving, but it's slow, and i hope it gets more exciting, because the plot is definately there. |
| InklingRose 2004-01-06 ch 8, | abuseAH! Poor Delia! Update soon! |