You should really try writing short stories and it would be interesting to see your own style with other poetry formats. You could try a haiku grouping or a sonnet, I have found it really ingaging and fun to experiment my own style and combine it with the way others traditionally write. Sometimes it is great to experiment. You should post more of your poems.

*sniff* it's so hearfelt... i think im gonna cry... *tear tear*
*lyz
*sniff*

i LOVE the imagry! that is what makes a great poem and you are all over that!! you rock! :)!

Basically what ur saying is your not a little kid anymore and you would thank whoever ur talking to to kindly allow you to be you. Am i right? *looks around hopefilly* Great poem!

Great! Again! i love the part about painting your own rainbow! beautifully said!

I love it. V. sad. V. emotional. Keep writing.
Luv,
Talon