Very good.

holy crap gurl, ur blowing me away! i think im becoming a poetry fan...
*lyz

why are you so good and i'm...well, not?! seriously! i love your writing, i only wish i could write this good!! keep up the AWESOME work! (btw, ever notice i say "awesome" way too much?!) lol... :)!

Yep, that's what i do for everyone. They do it for me too, so it all works out. I'm going to attempt a non-negative poem. Just 4 u and to see if i'm capable of doing so.

Yep, that's what friends are for. Psychologist, counselor, support in times of need... friends are the best! I really like the line "Stuck on an obscure shelf"... It's very descriptive. Good mind pictures.

Interesting. Very interesting. I love how you do the metaphor thingies in your poems, it lightens them up a bit, dontcha think? Lol.
Luv,
Talon

Oh my gosh that is wonderful. that is exactly how i feel sometimes. keep it up!