Great work, you're very talented. Luv the flow and the wording once more.

wonderful choice of words...eek, now I feel like all my poems are so childish...lol.
=summerdazed=

Powerful work. I also liked the use of italics.
~Heart of the Sword

*cries because it's good and sad at same time*

Guilt trips. Wow. I know all about those. ;) Awesome, as usual. I don't know how you do it but I wish I could! Great work, and I love your use of italics. Very creative and hmm...what's the word I'm looking for? I forgot, (sorry) but it really makes the piece stronger and just...yeah. Lol, I'm tired. Anyways, great job. Keep it up!!