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| Modern Poet 2004-03-11 ch 1, | Great work, you're very talented. Luv the flow and the wording once more. |
| Summerdazed 2003-12-30 ch 1, | wonderful choice of words...eek, now I feel like all my poems are so childish...lol. =summerdazed= |
| Keep it 100 2003-12-17 ch 1, | Powerful work. I also liked the use of italics. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Granite Claws 2003-12-12 ch 1, | *cries because it's good and sad at same time* |
| True Illusion 2003-12-10 ch 1, | Guilt trips. Wow. I know all about those. ;) Awesome, as usual. I don't know how you do it but I wish I could! Great work, and I love your use of italics. Very creative and hmm...what's the word I'm looking for? I forgot, (sorry) but it really makes the piece stronger and just...yeah. Lol, I'm tired. Anyways, great job. Keep it up!! |