Wow... That's awesome! lol It's got this.. flow to it. And of course flow is what makes poetry good. It also brings out a very true point about life and society as we know it v.v; Good job and I'll keep my eyes out for more!

I like the point you're making, I really do, but I think if you focussed on one thing, made it more specific, it would blow me away.
take care.

I think that this poem really does describe life in a way. A very beautiful poem!

Very good. I am in awe.

this is so beautiful...it totally describes and questions society today...oohh how I love this poem! YAY! thank you for posting it...it was a pleasure reading and reviewing! Keep writing...