Very nice, especially the beginning. You have a great way of saying things. I like this one. Keep writing.
~Genevieve

this poem has a lot of feeling that can be easily seen by anyone. I really like this one.

again... wow! v. v. v. v. v. v. v. v. good
*lyzii
ps: luv ya!

girl, once again, you completly blow me away! this poem is awesome! it's so heartfelt! i know how that is, and it saddens me to think you went through that, but that's life and growing up i guess...keep writing!! :)!

u should tell him, hun. i'm serious. even if your not mad at him. its a good poem that he needs to hear. luv me

I'm not mad at him talon, and what happened was probably my fault more than his.

Omg, thats so sad... you need to tell micheal to tell *him* about this poem. im serious. it might knock some sense into him.
Luv,
Talon