I like...I finelly got my stuff put up *yay* hopefully you know who this is if not oh well... I like your stuff its very nice, nice bio too...not to sure about the kicking thing thou I have yet to be kicked by you but Janna says thats a good thing hm oh well later

You have officialy gone off the deep end my friend. Reminds me of some of your dreams.

This is a good poem type thing. I REALLY like this one for some reason or another. UPDATE REDEMPTION SOON... no wait, even better, bring that binder thing that you want us to look at so you can update redemption!

wow, this is good. well done!

i'm extremely depressed so it might not be an excellent idea for me to review at this point. but its good, extrordinary in fact. and no, i'm not just using that to fit in with the ex word theme of the day.

And all is revealed at the end ^_^ An interesting piece. Odd in a sense, yes, but we all churn out those eye-brow quirking pieces now and then. They're good for the soul...or something 0_o Heh heh. Well actually I think they add an intriguing flair to our writings style. Anyway, a unique read :D Thanks for posting.
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Write on!
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Jess 0:o)

This is so good! Write more poems!
P.S Chapter 8 is up for Rock Star. I hope I'll see you in the review list once more. ~_^

wow. That struck an old chord. Yeah, i remember that, and its a rare work that can make me do so. Powerful, meaningful, and tastfully written. That and you dont get it for the first lines and then its like "OH!"

*blink blink stare* You're right . . . this is bizarre. I just read your other reviews, so maybe it's just me, but this poem does not make sense until the "un-smiling eyes" line - it's all very jumbledish. *feels like an idiot* Err, yeah, then again, this is my opinion. Anyway, I much like the part that makes sense to me, paticularily the "You won't know, you can't know" lines. To sum it all up: eep! niceness!
-Mizu

Wow. I really liked that. It said everything yet it hid a lot of things. You know?? Keep writting you do it well.

hey there.
Who this is deep very well written and quite incredibly brought across
hiding problems behind a smile a very intuitive ^_^
reminds me of life every day you just got stick with it

oh! no, that was so sad! sad in a good way, not a bad way.. not to say that... i've confused myself.. but i really liked it, and that's what i was going to say

i think the title works for it- it really caught my attention anyways good poem- i can relate