Hmm.. good.. sounds sorta familiar... XX XD

whoaa...trippy...dark and freaky, flippin creepy
good job

Very visual. You set the carnival mood well, and though a 'carnival of darkness' is a slightly used theme, you revamped it with your own style. Two very nice lines:
"You paid full price to get into this eternal darkness,
The clowns really like you, child."
Nice work.
-Ari